Wednesday 4 November 2009

pillion rider

each time he slows bike--
spring blossoms, succulent fruits...
her coy, joyous hug!

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4 comments:

Arun Meethale Chirakkal said...

Reading. Reading and re-reading.

P. Venugopal said...

He was stepping on the brakes all the time and singing birds were flying all over the place.

Arun Meethale Chirakkal said...

Will that be qualified as one; haiku?

P. Venugopal said...

I think so, in the modern sense of the term. A freeze shot. Its form makes us the leanest.